A Poem long forgotten

As long as I am here, locked up in my own misery, I might do as well as to try to humour you with a poem I made years ago.

Your Words

If I'd allow them enter,
unlikely as it is,
would them be able
to wipe away
these ever changing shades
of agony and dreariness?

If I'd ever let them in,
through my gloomy entrance,
would I be not
too curious to see them
turn ashes from my touch.

And if I'd ever let you hear
even the hint of my dark reveal,
wouldn't it be gross,
not only unworthy of your time,
but an offence against your ears.

If I'd ever let your near,
you'd probably pour soft words on me
quietly as the sun speaks
amid the shady basswoods
to deeply depressed seeds,
blinded by the dark soil's ceaseless retreat.

There was some speculations about me having any literary giftedness. Well, now it's proven. No, not any at all.

Severus Snape is property of J.K Rowlings, the author of Harry Potter -books the writings are mine though.

1 comment:

  1. Lily Evans wrote 26.10.2008 - 22:35
    Aww this is no humorous. This is a sad poem.
    Why are you so agonized my love? What dark side did you refer? Did you mean you being a Deatheater? *pouts*

    I don't care if they say you have a dark side. Whatever you could be, you are mine. Don't feel so tormented. *embraces her lover*

    Black wrote 27.10.2008 - 16:39
    Oh, you actually DO write poems.
    Well, I see nothing humorous. It is, as Lily said, sad. And makes me think about .... things.

    I think it's quite well written.

    Weasleys' twins wrote 28.10.2008 - 19:06
    Haha. Professor Never-heard-shampoo writes poems. XDD This is funnier than the chaos before.

    Black wrote 28.10.2008 - 19:46
    ^ Avada Kedavra

    Lily Evans wrote 28.10.2008 - 19:53
    *was going to punch 'Weasley disturbing Twins`' face but found them dead.

    James Potter wrote 28.10.2008 - 23:20
    Shooo Weaslys. You can go die if you think its funny *mutters curses*

    Severus, well well... I find it quite interesting. Is something bothering you, besides its me? *smirks*

    Black wrote 29.10.2008 - 16:14
    Oooh, look. Potter's here.
    *settles down to wait for Severus*

    Severus Snape wrote 30.10.2008 - 09:34
    Yes, the poem is quite dreadful, thanks for the comments, but as I told you, it's been written many years ago. I'm not in such an agony at the moment. And while attending my so called tea party... not any killing, please. Not even if it has a red head and a big mouth. I don't want any dead people lying here and there amongst my poems. Not even if it's Halloween.

    Black wrote 30.10.2008 - 13:14
    I'm sorry, but I could not resist.
    I have a feeling that Weasleys' twins will come back eventually.

    Weasleys' twins wrote 07.11.2008 - 20:28
    Ha. Missed! It's not so easy to get rid of Weasleys. :P And also what is the hostility from Lily? I don't think Harry's mam would never hit children.

    Lily Evans wrote 08.11.2008 - 06:58
    1. I am not anyone's mom.
    2. You are right I'll hit anyone if I find appropriate. You said you don't think I will never hit; 2 negative forms make a positive meaning. Fortunately(?!) what you said didn't go against me.

    James Potter wrote 08.11.2008 - 08:08
    To Weasleys- And Weasley twins aren't mean as you are playing it here, anyway..

    Black wrote 08.11.2008 - 10:27
    See? I said IT would come back ... But of course ... it's November.

    Weasleys' twins wrote 08.11.2008 - 13:35
    People here so easily get annoyed. What's wrong with you? Take a Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans! Okey Lily, we think Harry's mom would never hit children. And we don't talk about you if you are nobody's mom, so why you take it personal! And to James: Where we have been mean? We don't mean to be mean..

    Lily Evans wrote 08.11.2008 - 22:19
    You are so true Black. Once I was having a discussion with a friend of mine that we still don't know the remedy of incurable virus that keeps coming back. LOL! Oops! Let Severus deal with it. No.. he is already suffering. Aww I love him. *is sad*

    James Potter wrote 09.11.2008 - 21:13
    Weasleys, you are being lame. And yes Lily is the same Lily Evans we (me and Severus) have in school and yes you definitely meant her my friend. Its just that you didn't know we all are still too young to have kids. Anyway, I'm sure you are even more confused or a chaos going on in your mind. lol
    huh! I just came to say, keep your mean lame comments about almost everything to yourself. That makes you annoying,ok?? play nice here and get nice treatment from all of us.

    Weasleys' twins wrote 09.11.2008 - 22:05
    Excuse us who make you God of this place? We don't think you can say anybody to shut up. We haven't been mean anywhere and you all attacked towards us. We think you should think your own comments more than others. Thank you!

    Hermione Granger wrote 09.11.2008 - 23:38
    I thought this was professor Snape's personal diary, not anyone's playground. Tut, tut, you all. Look at your writings, you don't make any sense. I came here to read professor Snape's brilliant notes, not to claim this place as my own territory. And that's just what you should do too.

    Black wrote 10.11.2008 - 15:52
    Weasleys - nothing's wrong with us, it's just you.

    Lily - Severus is a tough man, he'll deal with it easily and will be back in no-time.
    Granger, you insufferable brat - I'm glad you make sense to yourself.

    Potter - I have nothing to say to you, I just thought that I couldn't leave you out of my comment. :)

    Good day to you all!

    Lily Evans wrote 10.11.2008 - 18:23
    Black- Thanks Black, I know he is strong. In fact he is the strongest person I've ever seen.
    Potter- for the first time I feel you are my good friend.
    Severus is fine and is back yay!

    Weasleys' twins wrote 10.11.2008 - 18:52
    Thank you Hermy! We think so too. We always think you are genious! Our brother is a lucky boy. ;)

    Severus Snape wrote 11.11.2008 - 10:23
    Oh, Miss Know-it-all decided to stick her turned up nose and teeth too large in here too. You always were such a precocious child. And still are, it seems. Same can't be said about those certain members of the Weasley family. Hmmm... let me see if I could find a library somewhere that Miss Granger could lose herself and you, you redheaded baboons, could burn.